A few original MIDIs

Discussion in 'Original Music' started by Teloch, Oct 29, 2003.

  1. Teloch

    Teloch New Member

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    All right, now. I've been composing since late July, using Anvil Studio almost exclusively. A lot of people say that I'm a good composer, although I personally don't look too highly on my "skills". Either way, I thought it would be nice to actually show my work to a wider audience. I welcome all comments and criticism.

    Enochian Sunrise - Original MIDIs by Teloch d'Oiad
  2. ZelRiptha

    ZelRiptha Thnow White but I drifted Staff Member Super Mod

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    I listened to Epochalyptic Skyline and Parable.

    These are nicely done. I get the feeling there is an ambient bent to your pieces? I like the unusual meter at the start of E.S. I might consider a bit more variation or less repeats in the repeated piano at the beginning as the repeats are slightly hard on the patience of the listener. I like the free melody in violin. The slightly dramatic transition to the ensemble portion is nice. I'm not sure about the slightly wild guitar near the end, but it is interesting. Parable has a nice opening. Nice drama and mystery. The beat section continues well from the intro. I'd make a similar suggestion here - literal repeats are mildly tedious. The addition of slap with an increase in tempo energizes the piece. I feel there's a bit of absense of melody in this section, maybe something high? The block chords and bass need a little help. What's there is good, don't get me wrong.

    Well, that's all for now, I've got to run. It's nice to hear from composers in the Originals forum. Thanks for sharing your work! :)
  3. menthol_ga

    menthol_ga New Member

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    couldn't get the link to work..
  4. ToryBoy

    ToryBoy New Member

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    link still not working ;)
  5. ZelRiptha

    ZelRiptha Thnow White but I drifted Staff Member Super Mod

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    Works for me fellas, not sure what's up for you all.
  6. xatef

    xatef New Member

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    link work fine
    good job dude :)
  7. Teloch

    Teloch New Member

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    Yeah, the link does tend to screw up sometimes. Sorry about that. Freewebs is a pathetic host. As soon as I figure out all of the filenames, I'll post individual links. Shouldn't take too long.
  8. dillema63.5

    dillema63.5 New Member

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    not bad at all:)
  9. raleighgm

    raleighgm Guest

    Very cool!
  10. Teloch

    Teloch New Member

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    An alternative

    Damn Freewebs...For everyone who can't get the link to work:

    Attached Files:

  11. Shaun500

    Shaun500 New Member

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    man those are nice.. io might be using one of them on my webbie...
  12. CBZED101

    CBZED101 New Member

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    Sounds good bro.:thumbsup:
  13. italian_psyc

    italian_psyc New Member

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    not bad not bad at all
  14. Oldsmobeast

    Oldsmobeast New Member

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    sound good to me :)
  15. htownteg

    htownteg New Member

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    sounds good
  16. kurdt

    kurdt New Member

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    Sounds good also in here :)
  17. riceboy

    riceboy New Member

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    sounds nice..
  18. speed4u

    speed4u New Member

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    mid

    how good is your composing

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