Can you Guys tell me What you think?

Discussion in 'Lyrics' started by Thegz1, Jan 16, 2005.

  1. Thegz1

    Thegz1 New Member

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    ~Quiet Words~



    This is my song to you
    That I have written in silence
    I wrote this just for you
    But I don't think that you'll notice
    Will you notice?

    I've spent so much time in the shadows
    And I went crazy to get you to know
    What it is that I feel
    But you just weren't listening

    Chorus
    So listen to my quiet words
    Theyre all I have to say
    I've tried to make myself heard
    But I failed every other way

    You're perfect and I know It
    I compare every girl to you
    I'd kill for you and I show it
    Theres nothing I wouldn't do

    Sometimes, when we speak
    It feels like you're miles away
    But my knees still go weak
    And I wish that you would stay

    Remember One thing

    This world, it changes every day
    Nothing is guaranteed
    But here I am, I'm here to stay
    Take my hand and walk with me

    Chorus
    So listen to my quiet words
    Theyre all I have to say
    I've tried to make myself heard
    But I failed every other way
    So, won't you stay?
  2. kim_eh

    kim_eh Gratified

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    Great job! I like those lyrics...

    "This world, it changes every day
    Nothing is guaranteed
    But here I am, I'm here to stay
    Take my hand and walk with me"

    Very good... I'm impressed.
  3. vbrio

    vbrio Lavander Lassie Staff Member Moderator

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    great lyrics, wish i could here it with the music
  4. willi001

    willi001 New Member

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    Good lyrics...Do you have music already?
  5. rodmad83

    rodmad83 New Member

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    I think the last verse and the chorus are really good try and work a bit on the rest its kinda scary if it is for a girl... stalkerish but other than that it's good. Maybe its just me and it sounds really good with music...

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