Curse The Miles (2011) Original Song

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  1. joelbfmv

    joelbfmv New Member

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    Curse the Miles

    (This is a song I wrote around the Spring/Summer of 2011, I think it has a rhyme scheme all the way through. This particular song is suppossed to be acoustic and sort of melancholic most of the way through and builds up at the end. Just helps you picture the sound better :) )


    (Verse)
    Love is eternal, it keeps us alive
    An everlasting force that we share
    I never was brave, now I'm taking the dive
    Being distant is too much to bear

    (Pre-chorus)
    Thoughts that you will soon return
    Like a star they always burn

    (Chorus)
    Far too long I will have to wait
    Too damn much it hurts
    For you to be there
    Always building the thirst
    Far too long I will always dream
    Turns my blood bitter cold
    That you are here, next to me
    Your body here to hold

    (Verse)
    On my mind, you do remain
    Just the smallest thought of you
    Helps me through the pain

    Times are hard, times are never fair
    Darling know this time is
    What we'll always share

    (Pre-chorus)
    Thoughts that you will soon return
    Like a star they always burn

    (Chorus)
    Far too long I will have to wait
    Too damn much it hurts
    For you to be there
    Always building the thirst
    Far too long I will always dream
    Turns my blood bitter cold
    That you are here, next to me
    Your body here to hold

    (Bridge)
    I curse these miles that separate
    I need you home with me today
    The love we have will keep us as one
    Come the day you’re not so far away

    (Chorus)
    Far too long I will have to wait
    Too damn much it hurts
    For you to be there
    Always building the thirst
    Far too long I will always dream
    Turns my blood bitter cold
    That you are here, next to me
    Your body here to hold


    (Second Bridge/Ending)
    I cursed these miles that kept us apart
    I knew that you'd be home one day
    Now you are here, held tight in my arms
    That day has come, you’re not far away

    You're here to stay
    Back in my arms today
  2. Tinman

    Tinman New Member

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    first thing...forgive this small comment, I`m not the best at commenting.

    Hi Joel, this is very workable song, I can hear the acoustic approach to it. I think its saying to much at the end..repeating the same thing, but thats so minor. good job.

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