heres my sing i wrote..

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  1. daniellej277

    daniellej277 New Member

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    heres my song i wrote..

    BOY SO FINE

    oh we boy do ya know the joy i feel when i look in your eyes im

    hypnotised im wise to the games your playin with me so boy so

    fine why dont ya swing my way i know we can hit it off just right i

    need your lovin cause its so sweet i know your the one for me

    tonights the night i aint holdin nothin back i dont give a damn

    what anybody says

    (chorous)why dont ya swing my way boy so fine

    oh please swing my way boy ohho boy so fine i know your the

    one for me boy so fine we can hit it off just right.....
    Last edited: Mar 2, 2004
  2. G-man

    G-man Prodigal Philanthropist

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    Cool!
    ...so how does this song go? Any music for it yet?
    Any ideas... Does anybody have any feedback for this?
    If we offer any suggestions do we get a cut when you are the next big star? :laugh2:


    BOY SO FINE

    oh we boy do ya know the joy i feel

    when i look in your eyes im hypnotised

    im wise to the games your playin with me

    so boy so fine why dont ya swing my way

    i know we can hit it off just right

    i need your lovin cause its so sweet

    i know your the one for me

    tonights the night i aint holdin nothin back

    i dont give a damn what anybody says


    (chorous)
    y dont ya swing my way boy so fine

    oh please swing my way boy ohho
  3. daniellej277

    daniellej277 New Member

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    yes i would love feedback and your damn right id give you a cut i love you guys you all rock g2g feel free to e mail me you all
    daniellej27741@mykernmail.com
  4. daniellej277

    daniellej277 New Member

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    FAR AWAY

    Do u look into his eyes and try not ta cry ya know he dosent love

    you the way that you love him does his smile seem ta fade when

    you look at his face does your world seem blue when he turns

    away from you but you know some day far away someone will

    love you now your sitin in the dark cryin cause he broke your

    heart and you know some day far away someone ...........will love

    you oh ho some one......will.......love.......you...

    (heres another song I wrote):cool:
    Last edited: Mar 3, 2004
  5. daniellej277

    daniellej277 New Member

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    IF YOU LOVED ME (solo)

    you said youd never leave me and youd always be with me

    look at you now now where are you now that youve come back in

    my life you expect me not to cry when you say i love you if you

    loved me then why did you leave me if you loved me why didnt

    you call to let me know you werent coming home to me when i

    was all alone if you loved me why did you break my heart and

    leave me with this pain after all this time i feel its a crime to my

    heart because i still love you i just think if you loved me you

    would have done these things

    (soloist&chorous)

    if you loved me you would have been there when i needed you if

    you loved me you would have cried with me if you loved me you

    would have shown it baby i cant go back to you cause i dont

    wanna hurt like that no more sorry i cant love you no more

    (solo)

    if you love me leave and never return

    ..... heres another song i wrote enjoy.....
    Last edited: Mar 3, 2004
  6. daniellej277

    daniellej277 New Member

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    so i wrote a lyric poem

    PAIN-------

    i hate when people pass judgement on me it hurts me bad i want

    to cry i havent cryed in so long i feel so sad from all the pain ive

    kept locked away for so long i feel like craweling in a dark hole

    and hiding so noone can find me and hurt me

    theres so much on my mind i feel like he77

    i wanna scream so loud & let it out i think no one would care

    i got an ugly taste of reality and couldnt handel it so i cried

    i fear no one would care if i died i dont even know who my

    friends are anymore my dreams seem so far below me now
  7. Sierradoll

    Sierradoll New Member

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    hey that is good so far im making my own song too
    so what kind of song is it supposed to be?(rap, rock, pop, etc.)
  8. daniellej277

    daniellej277 New Member

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    thanks its a rock song
  9. swit_angel

    swit_angel New Member

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    hey that's nice... :)
  10. dobby

    dobby New Member

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    cool song.
  11. voice of god

    voice of god Prodigal Pyjamas Pervert Staff Member Super Mod

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    thats a great sing u write. :D
  12. pyroeragon

    pyroeragon New Member

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    Cool

    That song is pretty good! Its way better than anything i could write.
  13. fra_chel

    fra_chel New Member

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    You are talented!! My congrats!!
  14. alycia

    alycia New Member

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    Re: heres my song i wrote..

    that song is perfect for my life right now...there's this guy from track. his name's Justin.
  15. Dedsant

    Dedsant New Member

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    great lyrics, keep rocking :cool:

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