My latest please feedback

Discussion in 'Original Music' started by Qam, Jun 11, 2004.

  1. Qam

    Qam New Member

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    It's a pretty good song, I think its kinda cheesy, its fairly simple and catchy, please feedback it. thanks.

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  2. ZelRiptha

    ZelRiptha Thnow White but I drifted Staff Member Super Mod

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    The rhythmic lines are interesting. It seems to ask for a melody, but has a minimalist flair of its own. You might try a key change or more substantial variation of the primary progression somewhere in the middle. That way you can engender a sense of satisfaction in a subsequent return to the original progression. It's a nice tune. :)
  3. kobefan2255

    kobefan2255 New Member

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    Didnt really like it sorry...somewhat annoying...
  4. Black_Kat

    Black_Kat Horny Hornist

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    It was a good listen, but I'll go with Zel with his opinion of a key change. It does need a change...the only thing that I would change if I were the song writer would be to add some variation to the B, F sharp, B, E thing that goes on for 40 seconds. It did get annoying there, but the rest was really good :)
  5. doyle_43

    doyle_43 New Member

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    it was very interesting. with a little improvment it would be very good.
  6. waxwizzard

    waxwizzard New Member

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    yea

    bro it is pritty good but needs a lil work with the melody

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