New Song by Me - Titled "Why" (Lyrics Included)

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  1. lpcompro

    lpcompro New Member

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    Please let me know what you think.

    Thanks,
    lpcompro

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    "Why"

    It seems we're only friends when it's right for you.
    Often times I wonder what got into you?
    What have you done? Where did you go?
    You're not the person I used to know

    And I wonder

    Why you chose the path you chose.
    Why you did all that you did.
    Why you changed all that you changed.
    You're no longer the person I once knew.

    Every time I look at you, you're not the one I see.
    There is always someone else staring back at me.
    Quickly you change, and you're not there.
    Jeckyll turns to Hyde. I must beware.

    And I wonder

    Why you chose the path you chose.
    Why you did all that you did.
    Why you changed all that you changed.
    You're no longer the person I once knew.

    Can't tolerate, commiserate.
    Comprehend, or understand.
    Can't tolerate, commiserate.
    Comprehend, or understand

    Why

    Why

    Why you chose the path you chose.
    Why you did all that you did.
    Why you changed all that you changed.

    Why you chose the path you chose.
    Why you did all that you did.
    Why you changed all that you changed.
    You're no longer the person I once knew.

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  2. howdydoody

    howdydoody New Member

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    i like it.. the are pretty good!:thumbsup:
  3. linuxchick

    linuxchick New Member

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    these lyrics sound vaguely familiar...top 40-ish
    but good :)
  4. ZelRiptha

    ZelRiptha Thnow White but I drifted Staff Member Super Mod

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    Not bad at all. I enjoyed it.
  5. jeaniesing

    jeaniesing Super Moderator Staff Member Super Mod

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    I agree.... enjoyable... this might not be your top40 breakout - but keep working at it!
  6. lpcompro

    lpcompro New Member

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    I'm glad you guys liked it.

    Thanks for the compliments. :)

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