Discussion in 'Original Music' started by shmoses, Jan 6, 2004.
i like this song a lot, i think it has potential.
This peice really makes me think about wandering around in a forest or something. its very melodic. great job. it sounds like something coldplay would write. I have 2 peices that I wrote, "child" and "confusion" it would be cool if you listened to those and tell me what you think. thanks.
thanks dude. that coldplay comment is very encouraging, because i was listening to quite a bit of coldplay at the time i wrote this, especially the scientist.
i really like it - seems like you put alot into making it
yeah, quite a bit. all the musical ideas i've ever tried to express are condensed into this song.
I listened and liked it a lot. For more detailed commentary, I'd have to listen again with a more critical ear. Interesting progression, though!
the progression is I-VI-VI(min)-V. i enjoy blurring the lines between major and minor tonalities. it's good ****.
it is cool
That progression is interesting... not bad! :thumbsup:
I'll listen to it some more later on... maybe provide you with some more feedback then
IF YOU LOVED ME (solo)
you said youd never leave me and youd always be with me
look at you now now where are you now that youve come back in
my life you expect me not to cry when you say i love you if you
loved me then why did you leave me if you loved me why didnt
you call to let me know you werent coming home to me when i
was all alone if you loved me why did you break my heart and
leave me with this pain after all this time i feel its a crime to my
heart because i still love you i just think if you loved me you
would have done these things
if you loved me you would have been there when i needed you if
you loved me you would have cried with me if you loved me you
would have shown it baby i cant go back to you cause i dont
wanna hurt like that no more sorry i cant love you no more
if you love me leave and never return
..... heres another song i wrote enjoy.....
i reaaly liked it too...i'm still struggling to make anything decent, but you did an excellent job!
I like it a lot.... my compliments!
Like it alot, you used an intersting prossive feel in it. Sounds like you like what you do!
beautiful. if you found someone to add classic guitar to be used against the melody instead of keyboard i think it would kick toosh cause it would show way different contrast!
that's an interesting possibility, man. i actually intend to do this song with a band some day, and it would be really hard to do live, without a piano player, so i've actually got an alternate 'live' version somewhere, with guitar replacing piano. i'm a big fan of the way the song ends with the layering, then the fadeout.
Interesting... I like it! I wish I could make MIDI's. If I could, I probably wouldn't have a social life... Lol.
I would love to listen to it... but this forum denies the download :thumbsup:
hehe... darn... I have to get some more cash
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