new song

Discussion in 'Lyrics' started by baseballdude, Jul 9, 2004.

  1. baseballdude

    baseballdude New Member

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    hey guys, this is my first time postin a lyric but well here it is, tell me what u think.


    THIS SONG


    I saw u the other day
    and I didnt know how to say
    all the things that were running through my head
    I’m not the greatest speaker
    I dont talk so well
    I knew, if I wanted you to hear
    what I wanted to say
    I could only express myself in this way

    Chorus: So I wrote you this song
    I dont care if its the wrong
    way to get a girl like you
    but its something I got to do
    My luv is more than the stars
    stronger than the trees
    but unlike them ill fall to my knees
    and beg and pray
    that someday
    I’ll hold u all night long
    thats why I wrote you this song

    you’re pretty girl
    I’m a quit guy
    we’re like night and day
    the earth and the sky
    but I’m willing to change
    if u would be mine
    cant u see
    if u give me a chance
    I’ll make it last
    for eternity

    CHORUS

    I cant find any other way
    to portray
    what im trying to say
    I’ll do anything
    that u want me to
    baby, if u play this game
    I grantee u wont lose
    cause your heart and mine
    are a perfect match a perfect find

    Chorus 2x
  2. nickske

    nickske New Member

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    well i must say i like it, maybe you can sing it for us to, then we can hear the genre and the speed of the song, but the way i read it, i said wow, if this was a clear song (no dark metal :p) it would have much succes!
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    illnes New Member

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    CyberCat Active Member

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    :thumbsup:

    Nice work!

    Now you have to write the music to go with it! :)
    Last edited: Oct 31, 2004

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