Post your own lyrics for critique

Discussion in 'Lyrics' started by AprilGeorge, May 25, 2012.

  1. AprilGeorge

    AprilGeorge New Member

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    Im really into party and techno songs, and writing party and techno songs is something I really want to do, eventhough Im not the best writer.
    I wrote a short song, and you may want to continue with the song. Hope you understand that this is my first Lyrics and appreciate that you dont go so hard with the criticism :)
    The song:
    Tequila Bottle
    vers 1
    Fix your make up
    Fix Your Hair
    Find the hottest dress
    finish with some perfect shoes
    then go to the "****ing" place

    vers 1
    Killing the floor
    with you but
    shake your body, hit the floor
    then go up until they se the spot

    Ref
    1 shoot isn`t enough
    2 shoot isn`t enough
    3 shoot isn`t enough
    so give me the tequila bottle

    1 shoot isn`t enough
    2 shoot isn`t enough
    3 shoot isn`t enough
    so give me the tequila bottle

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