Pretty simple song but I think its great

Discussion in 'Original Music' started by Qam, Jan 7, 2004.

  1. Qam

    Qam New Member

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    I think this is one of my better peices, but it sounds similar to a hardware commercial, but thats ok, I still like it alot. what do you guys think?

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  2. ZelRiptha

    ZelRiptha Thnow White but I drifted Staff Member Super Mod

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    I like it!

    Minor suggestions:
    Consider mixing octaves in the bass - the high duk-duk-duk sound is nice in soft passages. Maybe down an octave in the choruses?
    The predominance of the splash cymbal sound is distracting, try using more ride and less splash.
    It feels about 5 bpm too slow - a little more pep.
    Hold the last note 2 bars or more and let it die out.
    Nice song!
  3. dario-zg

    dario-zg New Member

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    it really sounds cool. you may think it's simple, but for someone who doesn't know how to make it it sounds complicated :))

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